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Raven by ~JonnySchweer:iconJonnySchweer:

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Flowing dress,
Adding to a supernatural aura.
Long flowing cloak,
covering feminine beauty.
Wide Hood,
concealing a watchful gaze.

Keen senses,
Aided by unholy powers.
Hidden abilities,
Within her agile body.
Daughter of a demon,
Rejecting her heritage.

Haunted by her father,
Embracing her humanity.
Fighting for the greater good,
and her dark self.
Wanting nothing more,
Than to live as a normal person
©2006-2010 ~JonnySchweer
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Author's Comments

Poem of Raven from Teen Titans. Raven is (c) of DC comics.

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Mood: Joy ~jasminevr Oct 12, 2006, 1:16:12 PM
I started reading this (not knowing that this was about Raven) and thought this sounds like Raven. Then I see the title :stupidme:

Great job on the poem; I really liked it.

:+fav:

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Wade: Shouldn't I just be myself?

Ron: No, that only works in cartoons!

Click it, or ticket --> [link]
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~JonnySchweer Oct 12, 2006, 6:25:24 PM
Thank you kindly for the compliment and the favorite of this poem.

I did it more as the Raven of comics not the anime Teen Titans Go.
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~jasminevr Oct 13, 2006, 11:36:19 AM
They're pretty close, ya know.

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Wade: Shouldn't I just be myself?

Ron: No, that only works in cartoons!

Click it, or ticket --> [link]
:iconrobseyes:
Mood: Wow! ~robseyes Nov 29, 2006, 7:56:39 PM
wow i like this
i like the imagery you giv this poem
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~JonnySchweer Nov 30, 2006, 8:33:53 AM
Thank you kindly, I am glad you liked it.
Imagry is one of the things I am good at.
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~RavensHiddenSoul May 30, 2007, 6:36:41 PM
So true...

I like this, a lot.

I really like the descriptive words you used.

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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Long live the Black Phoenix of Azarath! :jsenn:

*~*~*~*

"It may hurt, but at least I have... you."

~Dove, written May 10, 2008.

{My OC, quote from the current story, a part that has yet to be posted...}
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~JonnySchweer May 31, 2007, 5:40:50 AM
Thanks kindly.


.......... And welcome to the wild world of dA!!!!!!
:iconravenshiddensoul:
~RavensHiddenSoul Jun 20, 2007, 1:09:45 PM
Thanks! Wild.. I like that!

You're welcome!

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*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*

Long live the Black Phoenix of Azarath! :jsenn:

*~*~*~*

"It may hurt, but at least I have... you."

~Dove, written May 10, 2008.

{My OC, quote from the current story, a part that has yet to be posted...}
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Mood: Love *EvynC Jun 25, 2008, 12:41:12 PM
Awe
Superbly done

--
Being happy is better than being sad or angry, both are necessary; they show us just how nice happiness is.

~If you'd like something I've said to be clarified, just ask:)
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